Sunday, August 15, 2010

starting A CLASS

PLEASE FORGIVE THE KEYBoard issues, they canT BE helped. ill update you why later. i decided to take a frienD UP ON his offer to teach me to honE MY SKILLS TO BE a writer, so i will be PUTTINg my assignMENTs up here for you all to follow.
my first assigNmenT WAS A FREE VERSE POEM ABout what me my "ghosts" would say to me.

aSSIGNmenT #1      gRADE B






reinCARNAtion



YOU SHOULD HAVE SEEN it coming,

YOU COULD HAVE HELPED ME THROUGH

MY WORLD WAS FADINg,

as yours was shiny and NEw



I LAID THERE FOR HOURS

PLEADING for a lift

nO ONe heard my screams

i beGGED PLEADED AND wished.



FINally when I COULD FEEL No more

THO i heard anD SAW AND smelt

my last day on EARTH

WOULD BE your first out.
 
Mellie out.

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